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Edna Pontellier
Wife of Léonce Pontellier and mother of two young boys, Etienne and Raoul. At Grand Isle she learns to swim for the first time, takes up painting seriously, and begins an emotional awakening that leads her to fall in love with Robert Lebrun and later take Alcée Arobin as a lover. She eventually moves out of her husband's grand house into a small rented 'pigeon house,' and the novel ends with her swimming alone far out into the Gulf.
Léonce Pontellier
A forty-year-old New Orleans stockbroker, Edna's husband, medium height with a trimmed beard and eyeglasses. He values propriety and appearances, is generous with money but possessive of his wife as a kind of property, and later arranges to have their home elaborately renovated and puts a false notice in the paper to disguise his wife's separate living arrangements.
Robert Lebrun
Son of Madame Lebrun who owns the Grand Isle cottages; each summer he attaches himself devotedly to one married woman as an accepted, harmless flirtation, previously to Madame Ratignolle. He falls genuinely in love with Edna Pontellier, flees to Mexico to escape his feelings, and upon his return leaves her a final note reading 'I love you. Good-by—because I love you.'
Adèle Ratignolle
Edna's close friend at Grand Isle and in New Orleans, the picture of the devoted 'mother-woman' who idolizes her children and husband. She is an accomplished pianist who plays for others' dancing, becomes pregnant over the course of the story, and during a difficult childbirth extracts from Edna the plea to 'think of the children.'
Mademoiselle Reisz
An unmarried, unconventional pianist who avoids swimming and eats chocolates for sustenance, disdainful of Madame Lebrun's table. She keeps Robert Lebrun's letters from Mexico and shares them with Edna, encourages Edna's artistic ambitions, and tells her that a true artist needs 'the courageous soul that dares and defies.'
Alcée Arobin
A fashionable, idle New Orleans man about town, a familiar figure at the race course, the opera, and exclusive clubs, with a perpetual smile and a slightly insolent manner. He pursues Edna Pontellier after Robert's departure, taking her to the races and eventually becoming her lover, though she feels no real love for him.
Madame Lebrun
A fresh, pretty widow always dressed in white who runs the pension of cottages at Grand Isle, bustling and giving orders in a high voice to servants and yard-boys. She is mother to Robert and Victor Lebrun and keeps a noisy green parrot and mocking-bird outside her main house.
Victor Lebrun
Robert's younger brother, charming and somewhat reckless; he sings uninvited at Edna's elaborate birthday dinner despite being asked to stop, and is known for flirtations and volubility that dissolve into dreamy silence under the influence of wine.
Doctor Mandelet
The family physician who attends Madame Ratignolle's difficult childbirth and has a long career of hearing the private confessions of women; he senses something troubling Edna and reflects on the human stories he has witnessed as a doctor, including tales of women's love straying and returning.
Mariequita
A young Cajun/Spanish girl at Grand Isle who sails with Robert and Edna to the Chênière Caminada, carries shrimp in a bamboo basket covered with Spanish moss, and gossips pointedly about Edna's marriage and reputation.
Madame Antoine
An old woman living on the Chênière Caminada who shelters Edna and Robert for a day and night after Edna faints from the heat, providing a simple room, rice powder, bread, and wine, and later becomes the subject of an invented romantic tale Edna tells at a dinner party.
Mrs. Highcamp
A worldly, unaffected blonde New Orleans socialite in her forties with an indifferent manner, who uses her daughter as a pretext to cultivate the company of fashionable young men like Alcée Arobin, and accompanies Edna to the races and to Victor's singing at her birthday dinner.
Ma'ame Pélagie
The elder of two sisters living in a log cabin beside the ruins of their grand antebellum plantation house, which was burned during the Civil War. She secretly visits the ruin at night to relive visions of the old splendor and dreams of one day rebuilding it, even at the cost of her sister's happiness.
Mam'selle Pauline
Pélagie's younger sister, who has only faint memories of the family's pre-war plantation life and defers to her sister in all things, saying 'Yes, Sesoeur' or 'No, Sesoeur' to nearly everything, though she comes to long for a more ordinary, modern life.
Léandre
Brother of Pélagie and Pauline who left the ruined family plantation to conduct business in cities; his motherless daughter is sent to live with her aunts at Côte Joyeuse, prompting changes in the sisters' secluded life.
Désirée Aubigny
A foundling of unknown parentage adopted by the Valmondés, found asleep as a baby against a stone pillar; she marries Armand Aubigny and bears his child. When the infant's features reveal mixed racial ancestry, Armand rejects her; she walks with the baby into a deep bayou and does not return.
Armand Aubigny
Master of the L'Abri plantation, educated in Paris, who falls suddenly and violently in love with Désirée and marries her despite her unknown origins. His rule over his enslaved workers is strict and joyless; upon discovering signs that his child is of mixed race, he coldly rejects Désirée and later burns her letters and belongings in a bonfire in the yard.
Monsieur and Madame Valmondé
The couple who found and raised Désirée after discovering her asleep as an infant near their gateposts; Monsieur Valmondé initially urges caution about her unknown origins before her marriage to Armand Aubigny, while Madame Valmondé later visits Désirée and her baby at L'Abri.
La Folle
A Black woman known as 'La Folle' who has never crossed the bayou bordering the plantation due to an old terror, until she carries an injured child called Chéri across it to fetch help, causing awe and fear among those who witness her cross for the first time.
Locations6
Grand Isle
A Gulf Coast resort island south of New Orleans where Madame Lebrun runs a pension of small cottages connected by wooden 'bridges,' with a main house, water-oaks, croquet lawns, and a beach where the vacationing Creole families of New Orleans spend their summers; site of Edna Pontellier's awakening and her final swim.
New Orleans / Esplanade Street
The Pontelliers' home city, where Léonce works as a broker and Edna makes and receives social calls; their handsome residence on Esplanade Street is later given a cover story of 'sumptuous alterations' to explain Edna's move to a smaller home.
The Pigeon House
A small, modest rented house in New Orleans that Edna moves into after leaving her husband's grand residence, which she comes to feel gives her a sense of descending socially but rising spiritually and gaining independence.
Chênière Caminada
A nearby island reached by lugger or sailboat from Grand Isle, home to a small church where vacationers attend mass and to Madame Antoine's cottage, where Edna and Robert spend a day and night together.
L'Abri
Armand Aubigny's Louisiana plantation, a sad-looking yellow stuccoed house with a steep black roof and wide galleries shadowed by old oaks, where enslaved workers labor under Armand's strict rule and where Désirée and her child ultimately disappear into the surrounding bayou.
Côte Joyeuse
The rural plantation home of the Pélagie/Pauline family, whose original grand house was destroyed by fire during the Civil War, leaving only ruins beside the log cabin the sisters now inhabit; the site of Pélagie's secret nighttime visits to the ruin.
Organizations1
Creole Society of New Orleans
A close-knit, French-descended social world governing the Pontelliers', Ratignolles', and Lebruns' lives, marked by customs of physical openness and frank talk between the sexes alongside surprisingly little real jealousy between spouses, strict expectations of motherhood and wifely devotion, and rituals like visiting cards, soirées musicales, and summer sojourns at Grand Isle.
Items2
Robert's Farewell Note
A note Robert Lebrun leaves for Edna in the pigeon house rather than waiting to say goodbye in person, reading simply: 'I love you. Good-by—because I love you.' Edna reads it collapsed on the sofa and stays awake all night after finding it.
The Birthday Diamonds
A cluster of diamonds Léonce Pontellier sends from New York as a birthday gift, worn by Edna in her hair at the lavish dinner she hosts before leaving their Esplanade Street house; she turns twenty-nine that night.
Lore1
The 'Mother-Women' of Grand Isle
A term used to describe the idealized wives and mothers who summer at Grand Isle, who idolize their children, worship their husbands, and consider it a privilege to efface their own individuality in service of their families—a standard against which Edna Pontellier is measured and found wanting.
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